Austin, this is very sad and the question of why may never be answered. It is not your fault that she decided to go. Sometimes mothers and fathers think there is no other way out of their problems and don't realize the hurt and pain they leave behind in making decisions to leave. I really hope some day you will be the one to get an answer to why. Well done.

I'm sorry about the situation. I'm sure its very hard on you & the question why would definitely be in your mind..wondering why she left. I hope you get an answer because you deserve it. You can really feel your emotion in this piece, nicely done.

After reading the end and seeing your clincher and how the title works its way into the whole mix was quite brilliant. every line was pure emotion. i have never had something happen to me like this, but after reading this. i may have some idea. you described it quite vividly. you have quite the talent for expression. very well done. 5/5
~Kuro