Aw kind of a tear jerker.. beautiful write & full of emotion. You did a wonderful job Olwin .

Such a lovely soft piece :] It's so filled with amazing imagery and I really love how I felt while reading this. Very nice work dear. Nik

Very nice and loving thoughts. I wish I could say them to someone as well. Good job.

A very warm and wonderful piece, well penned with honest love for that someone special.
An enjoyable read.
Paul

Olwin
What a beautiful poem :) Congrats on tieing for the first place for the Think Spring contest :)

I wrapped my dreams around you,
saw the starlight in your eyes.
Wanting you forever...
held so tightly 'neath the skies.

How hard it is sometime to love someone in our dreams. I wait in my dreams to be reunited with my true love.

But like the flowers that blossom,
which come and go what may...
My heart shall wait forever,
til I see you, some fine day.

One day the time will come :) What a heart warming piece Olwin filled with such sweet loving emotions.
Excellent job!
Love Cindy

Lovely and great use of words :) keep it up!!