Comments : Strength

  • 14 years ago

    by mandy

    Beautiful, moving, and so sad.

    "Sunk in, it did. Soaked through and through with all your words, your lies, your hurt, your trying."

    -This is my favorite line. I love the way you worded it here, the way it flows. I also enjoy the image you've given the reader. "Soaked through", is a wonderful and unique way to explain how this situation has made you feel.

    Wonderful write, keep the poems coming!

    mandy :)