I'm guessing this is a song, right? It reminded me of some lyrics of a song I cannot seem to remember.
Your chorus wasn't bad at all. I just need to criticize some things here:

"The wind it chills me,
but to me its warmth,
as i lay here dying,
i see so much more..."
^
First line: I suggest you place a comma after 'wind'.
Second line: Be careful because 'its' means something else, so you need to write it 'it's' or 'it is'.
Last two lines: make sure you always capitalize the 'i'.

"I found myself today!
as i lie here dying awake!
i can see myself so clearly!
as i slowly fade away!...
I found myself today..."
^
I was so very distracted while reading this stanza, or chorus if you want to call it so; the exclamation marks confused me and they are useless there. And stop placing too many dots, it's not nice.

"as the life Ive lived replays the scenes Ive once known,
oh...
Its time to head back home..."
^
Same thing here with "its" and "Ive". And with the dots.

Good work though :)
Write on!

Wow i love this piece of work, it made me go to my own word i can vitualize this whole poem but i do agree with "Nema" you should try to fiz youre grammar it was kind of confuseing other then that keep writing its really good

Excellent write deep and intense.