"Strength; To hold my head high.
Why do I have this urge to cry?"

That is one of my favorite lines throughout this amazing poem. This poem definitely deserves a 5/5 wow. your really good at writing poems.
I went through a time like this, but it took me awhile to get over it. I wasn't writing poems at the time, but now I kind of write about it now. But i'd love to read more of your poems. So I'm going to go do that.

Keep on Writing-Miranda!

This one is very beautiful.

Hi, having read through a few of your poems, I chose this one to comment upon as I think it most clearly demonstrates the potential that you have, the emerging voice.

If you are intent upon developing your poetic 'voice', I would like to see you tackle something a little more heavyweight, perhaps express your views on the path the world is taking today?

Best wishes, Dave