Rusheena, I'm not a fan of rhyme, maybe it's just something that I realised I'm not overly great at, unless I have days and days to think about it, and I don't add myself to the poem...I like subtle rhymes, here and there, but in a way like this, it's not me...if I write in rhyme, it's either when I don't mean to, or I've spent days on it,

but I think you did it really well, it is so smooth and the story behind it, is one of true pain, this need to save someone, to hurt to save in a way...

I really liked this piece, the tone and the darkness to it...it was really intriguing.
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