You poem is very good, but you do need a little bit more feelin in them, i understand where you coming from n how u feel, but when you get ur heart broken again and you write you next poem about it put some anger, tears and destrote init ok hun, you doin really well for you age lol, you only younge life gets better trust me im livein proof, if you need any help add me on face book if you ave it ok : jodieharris,