Comments : Tell me

  • 13 years ago

    by tainted melody

    Cool I love the ending on this it seems like it was a nice way to end this poem in a happy place. ^_^

  • 13 years ago

    by RynZelara

    This poem really underscores the need to not be so passive when it comes to relationships, in the sense of not immediately assuming that the other person doesn't feel the same about you, or would never have an interest in you at all. Sometimes it takes boldness and initiative to progress a relationship, or to start one in the first place. Great job on this one. =)