Clever use of words...as always

Made me laugh...

Haven't written or typed out anything [except for this] in a while, and truly this is a poem worth the time to read and also to ponder - oh why oh why weren't I the one to write something like this...!!!??? Nope, I am no contradiction, and you'd bet I'd be the last one to be such...It's been a long time since came across something worth reading in the pile of craps that this site has to offer - pardon my vocab...Look closer and I too make no sense...KAPISH... :-P

"searching for their stories
but they remain unbudged
only to listen
to this noisy tapping"

You know that feeling when you're clicking thru websites, not really looking at anything and all abrupt you stumble upon something that reminds you of a memory that you wished never came across and later on that "something" kept banging like a million electric volts in your head? At least that's what this poem made me feel like, although your notion seemed completely different...Yep, "couldn't get out" myself properly too...Anyway, it's high time that I keep my babbles to a minimal...GR8 WRYTE - now I got "crap inside my keyboard" too...YAY...*smirks, smiles and laughs*...MWAHAHA... :-D

Keep writing, best regards and blah blah,

RK

I've been awake too long and pardon my babble...Just had to let out... :'-(

The "Honestly" and the "probably" from the first stanza are charming. Actually, this entire poem is charming. All of your poems are charming.

Screw you!

Just playing. I must say though that the last "jhihhjjhjjmj" part was my favorite.

Definitely a 5 for 5'er my friend ;)

Oh my!!! I really did "LOL" at the "jhijujujjuhhjmj"

I almost think this should be in the "funny" category, even though I know it's dead serious! It's so rare to read an EXCELLENT, non-plagiarized funny poem.

I use my canned air about every other day and I think I get half a cat's worth of his fur out each time!

Great work!

I must admit this made me laugh too! I loved your humor so much, brilliant! My first impression of the poem was this has to be about a keyboard, because I definitely recognized the qwert because I had to learn that over & over in elementary school so I knew where the keys all were! The ending was great, it definitely gave the reader one last laugh! Very original!

A refreshingly quirky qwerty poem. Your choice of subject is always interesting and unique.

Poems (good ones, too) really ARE, often,
just lying around the house...;~)
this piece echoes my own experience
so totally (well, except for the coin part) that
I am chuckling the knowing chuckle
of the knowing...........