MaryAnne,

What a story! I was reading it with my mouth ajar!
You sure have a talent, it had my attention from beginning to end.
It was very sad to read, but this is waht happens in real life, also in my country...many people lose their way and now with this recession it has gotten even worse.

Well done indeed:)

God bless and a hug,

5/5 Ingrid

A heart wrenching story you have woven with your words. How many stories are there like this? Well done.

I really loved this, although it was really long..you never once could take your eyes off of it. I was so engaged in what you were writing & although its not a true story like you`ve told me already it felt so real to me because of how well written it was. Absolutely amazing work

You are bad bad writer... you made me cry !

at first i thought, its a long poem lets skip to another one but as i started reading it. i was afraid it would end. so imaginative.. I loved it..