Comments : Memories

  • 13 years ago

    by chind

    This was such a simple, yet powerful and sad piece ...
    i loved it ... i could really feel how you felt by your words.

    "I wish i new how to move on
    but sometimes time cant always heal
    i wear a smile, but deep down
    i know this smile isnt real."
    - my favourite stanza, you ended it perfectly. good work!

    hope you're okay!