Very nicely done, a true scene in many bars these days. You really brought it to life.

These poems about everyday life are my favorite reads of late and this one delivers that theme very well, the repetitive line at the end exemplifies human nature to repeat over and over that which does not work.

There is no much truth to this. i had to add it to my favorites, and i really liked how you ended it. you know the feeling when you watch a good movie but it ends in a way that you just sit there and watch the credits, deep in thought. i got that same feeling from this poem. thank you for sharing.

There is *so* much truth.

Well narrated Sylvia... life in a different perspective...