Comments : Mummy please stop crying

  • 11 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    OMG, I cannot believe this poem has no comments!

    I honestly think this is such a powerful poem, it brought tears to my eyes. I could imagine such a young child being so confused just as you described.

    While first reading the poem I thought the father maybe left through a divorce, I could feel my heart sink as the child questioned the head stone!

    You have written this so well from the childs point of view, great start and such a strong ending.

    Well done, 5/5 from me.