Comments : Because of You

  • 13 years ago

    by tainted melody

    I think this was awsome, as are all off yours lol but i like how you hint to the words i love you , but don't actually say them... great write ^_^

  • 13 years ago

    by RynZelara

    Hmm, I'm getting the same "darkness" from this poem as I did the other one. Well, except the end of course. There can't ever be anything dark about Jehovah. ^_^ He provides for us in so many ways and helps us even when we feel like we don't deserve it. Great emotion in this one as well, it also promotes optimism, always looking for the brighter side of something.