Comments : Just Walk

  • 13 years ago

    by chind

    Goodybyes are difficult things to do ....

    Anyway, that was very good, i enjoyed the whole thing thoroughly! the first 5 lines are actually brilliant, my favourite bit of the piece:) well done!

  • 13 years ago

    by Hallucinostic

    A very lovely poem. Beautifully written.

  • 13 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    I definately enjoyed this it was really well done and had a nice message behind it. Although its tough to walk away it'll make us stronger, no use in pretending something will work when it won't. Great job 5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by yblehs

    "A few more feet, a few more yards"

    That was a strong opening line. It had a strong meaning too, of letting go and moving on, which is tough to do...."Just Walk" was a nice title to. It's simple, because in situations like these, you just have to walk..
    five outta five!