Comments : Withering(Tanka)

  • 13 years ago

    by Sylvia

    Roses are beautiful until they begin to wilt and wither, then they can be ugly. I could see the vision of this process taking place as I read. Well done.

  • 13 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    A wilting rose, a wonderful picture painted. Awesome write

  • 13 years ago

    by Sourav

    This is wonderful!

  • 13 years ago

    by Anthony M

    Provoking deep thoughts in such a short space is a difficult task that you have captured well here.