BEAU-TI-FUL!
I disagree with whomever gave this a 4, definitely deserves a 5!

"Dark melodies drift where I lay,
I find myself in a state of dismay"
- lovely start to the piece. 'dark melodies' i really like that!

I really liked your title as well "Waves of Exaltation". mmm!

"patience can only last so long, the dreadful storm has won."
- true! even though they say patience is a virtue, but cant expect us to wait too long!

short, good read, well done!

i also liked how the piece kind of started out short, and then as the poem progressed your lines were more drawn out, and it was kind of making me catch my breathe! weew

I have to agree with chinds i also disagree with whoever gave this a four its a simple poem yes short and sweet and yet im not usually a fan of short poems but i enjoyed this one as well i love the storm ragin it was a perfect comparison i could feel everything and hear the thunder and everything as well which is a touch on a good poem again great job and bravo!