Sylvia
very vivid imagery in this piece....feelings I know so well.
Excellent job!
Love Cindy

I know almost all have felt this feeling sometime in our lives, you have really captured it well here... awesome job

I loved the word choice! The piece was thought provoking and had a powerful ending. Great job!

What an awesome piece.The imagery was great and you capture the very essence of the inner pain.
Your word choice is excellent.
Good job on this piece Sylvia.

Amazing and dark. Congrats on the win 5/5

Congrats on your win Sylvia :)
Love Cindy

Wow this is deep