Comments : Light And Dark

  • 13 years ago

    by Kayla

    Well... this poem was absolutely beautiful. My favorite part was the 5th stanza down. Just because those were the stanza's you mostly let your guard down in and started truly expressing your love and how much you miss him every single day. How it's soo difficult but yet you can't help but wait it out because you L-O-V-E him and are gonna fight for him no matter what. Each stanza was short, sweet, and full of emotion and your love. I'm sure many people out there will be able to relate to this in their own ways, especially army wives. Couples separated by distance. Reading your words will give them the strength to keep going no matter what harsh times blow their way. Absolutely beautiful. I got on just to read this and I'm glad I did.(: Love ya, girl. 5/5.

    -- Kayla Marie.

  • 12 years ago

    by Captain Lonesome

    Continue t scream silently, there are those of us who are listening!!!!!!!!!!!

  • 12 years ago

    by Captain Lonesome

    Wow, very powerful! Attachment can be something that lifts us up so very high, or something that can weigh immensely upon us, be strong and carry on!! Good luck and Great poem!!