I didn't really like the jagged lines thing, it actually confused me at first, but then I figured it out...I guess it's different than how people usually use that style to put into their poetry but can't say I liked it. Other than that interesting write, it seemed like a bunch of different ideas in one, that were kind of all different in their own ways...but that made the poem more interesting...Nicely done.

Impressive very creative poem your one of the few who actually amaze me.

Melissa
Congrats on your win :)
Take care
Cindy