Comments : Block your face

  • 13 years ago

    by mandy

    Good poem!

    "hopefully you see. i cant change. i wont change.
    i will go my own way."

    - I really love how you ended it.

    Did you notice how you said you wanted this person in your poem to change but you were also unwilling to change? It's funny how that works. I have a similar problem with someone in my life, but if you believe you're right and want what's best for yourself, leave the rest behind and go for what you want!

    I can really relate to this poem, your words touched my heart. 5/5

    mandy :)