This poem could be a 5/5 in my book.
It speaks a truth that most people seem to forget.
Sometimes in life we think that there's an invisible gun held against our head just waiting for us to set it off. Even if someone is "forcing you" they are not.
I'm not going to rate it though. I really think that you can re-write this or tweek it in order to make it even more powerful. I know that this piece can rock others worlds. Best of luck to you, and thanks for the read.
>~Spirit~>