To me this is one of your better poems.
I can see your growth through your poems.

I love the word choice in this poem, as well as the introduction of rhyme. The message that you place in this poem is wonderful and rings true. Just work on the reduction of repitition and you're set.
Thanks for the read.
>~Spirit~>

Actually this is one of my newest ones from this year thank you

This poem posses such a pure honesty, In every word you wrote down as you express your love
to your man. Great job, keep writing.

thank you for the wonderful comment on my poem too!