Comments : Things that make hearts break

  • 13 years ago

    by Siham

    Wooooooow brilliant work , i can relate
    "... fairytale that neva cum tru and selfish ppl who lie 2 me selfish ppl jus like u ." well said
    5/5 excellent

  • 13 years ago

    by Pink Butterfly

    Cool!!!! lol...one of the coolest poems I read. It's unusual that males use the word "fairytale" in their composition...I can sense you are a wonderful person. Live your life wonderfully...just forget about fairy tales if they don't come true...Life still rockz!!! haha..God bless you!!!

    -Pink Butterfly-