I really like this .. It gives me a good idea on soul mates I think its cute amazing, I like the part about the princess liea .. I really like it

5/5

THIS HAS TO BE THE BEST POEM Ive read in a while! :) I take my hat off to you dear friend for penning such a heartfelt, endearing, beautiful write... that speaks of what a soulmate truely is.

Well Done! .. Looking forward to reading more of yours :)

All the Best, Olwin.

I do believe destiny selects our soulmate for us but sometimes it takes more than one lifetime to find them. I like to think of the other times as practice runs so we are sure when they finally come along. This was quite a long verse but your rhyme and flow were impecible throughout. I really enjoyed reading this one from you, well done.

Beautiful with a touch of humor! It was thoroughly enjoyable. :) 5/5

Soulmates, our perfectly divinely created other half of ourself. I loved this stanza:

That's its written in the cosmos,
as it's written here on earth.
We were destine for each other
from the moment of our birth.

^^^what a beautiful thought. This is a really great poem Randy. I noticed your tight syllable count until this line

For "Our particle" of never ending sizes,
^^^too many syllables compared to the rest
also the last stanza needs tightening as well.
When you have kept the count basically strict all the way thru when you hit these lines the poem kind of goes off a little.

Fantastic rhyme and storytelling but even more beautiful are the gems inside your lines. All the best Randy
Lostlove

"In the matrix you're my Trinity,
in 300...! you're my Queen!
In Star Wars you're my Leia,
And in others, as we deem."

This was so so cute, it really made me smile. I hope you show this lady these beautiful poems

I see what you mean about the quote and this poem. You're right it's a parallel meaning, My favorite stanza

"When I pass through this world,
if for a time, you fear I'm gone.
Just know that we exist somewhere,
And we're always living on."

Excellent my friend