Comments : Master of Deception

  • 13 years ago

    by PinkyPrincess

    Wow.... Beautifully written. I can relate to this! I loved it and the title really grabbed my attention!

  • 13 years ago

    by tainted melody

    Wow this poem is sooooo going into my fav"s list it was awsome and really emotional.^_^

  • 13 years ago

    by RynZelara

    Great use of imagery in this poem as well, and I like the subtle shift in theme from "You losing him" to "Him losing you" through your poems. It reflects self-confidence and self-worth, and really strengthens the resolve to keep going.