Comments : This world is not my home.

  • 10 years ago

    by Ingrid de Klerck

    Hi Paul,

    I have a few suggestions for you that I will put between brackets, feel free to use of ignore them:

    This world is not my home,
    my home is in Heaven above.
    It's a place where life is eternal,
    and filled with an abundance of love.

    I can agree 100% with that and what a beautiful and heart warming thought:)

    If tonight my maker should call me home,
    [I'm] prepared and is happy to go.
    Wouldn't miss a single thing,
    from this wicked world down here below.

    When I get to Heaven,
    what a joyous day that will be.
    [Seeing] the faces of my loved ones,
    at Heavens gate, eagerly awaiting me.

    It would be such an honor,
    to receive my makers grace.
    It would be a greater honor,
    to meet my Jesus face to face.

    Yes, away from the toxins of this world,
    I will journey eagerly,
    to take up eternal residence,
    in that place my Jesus prepared for me.

    I think people that might not believe in God, start doing so when they read you:)

    Well done, a pleasure as always,

    God bless,

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 10 years ago

    by Ingrid de Klerck

    Forgot one!

    I'm prepared and [ am] happy to go

    Either you say : "I am" or just leave out the verb all together, both options are good.

  • 10 years ago

    by Sylvia

    You are right this world is not our home, heaven is. Well done.