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by Ingrid de Klerck
I have a few suggestions for you that I will put between brackets, feel free to use of ignore them:
This world is not my home,
my home is in Heaven above.
It's a place where life is eternal,
and filled with an abundance of love.
I can agree 100% with that and what a beautiful and heart warming thought:)
If tonight my maker should call me home,
[I'm] prepared and is happy to go.
Wouldn't miss a single thing,
from this wicked world down here below.
When I get to Heaven,
what a joyous day that will be.
[Seeing] the faces of my loved ones,
at Heavens gate, eagerly awaiting me.
It would be such an honor,
to receive my makers grace.
It would be a greater honor,
to meet my Jesus face to face.
Yes, away from the toxins of this world,
I will journey eagerly,
to take up eternal residence,
in that place my Jesus prepared for me.
I think people that might not believe in God, start doing so when they read you:)
Well done, a pleasure as always,
I'm prepared and [ am] happy to go
Either you say : "I am" or just leave out the verb all together, both options are good.
You are right this world is not our home, heaven is. Well done.