Comments : Secrets have power

  • 13 years ago

    by Nicko

    I really enjoyed reading this poem, very evocative. It made me think of my own secrets and the power they contain, you have conveyed your message very well and it's made me want to read more of your work.

    Nicko

  • 13 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    Your words definitely speak wisdom. I really loved your title & concept of the poem. The title was very intriguing because it's a contradiction, a paradox and a very interesting one at that. It's so true, secrets do indeed have power, and are spoken loud, rather than kept quiet like their supposed to be. I really adored reading this, it was something fresh, different and makes so much sense.. Well done

  • 13 years ago

    by Ingrid

    This poem has well worded thoughts, yet lacks the wording to make it an excellent poem, instead of just good. It is worth a 5/5, but I want to challenge you to choose words that are more poetic.

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 13 years ago

    by PinkyPrincess

    Wow!! I love everything about this poem! The title caught my eye and the poem itself was even better than what I imagined it would be. I agree with this poem completely and really enjoyed it! It really touched me... Great job!