Comments : Clemency

  • 10 years ago

    by chind

    Another very amazing write. I really like your writing style.

    "my eyes hurt; they see, but no longer understand.
    my heart bleeds; it beats, but has no flow."
    - i think these two lines were pretty damn amazing.

    I like your repetition of god in the final stanza, i think it was a very powerful ending. KUDOS