Comments : My Poem

  • 13 years ago

    by abracadabra

    Ha, Melissa. So many poets feel so harassed by their own works that they need to write about it. I have done it many times. You have done it well. I can really empathise with this poem. While it is not startlingly beautiful like many of your other poems, it still contains your trademark beautiful lines and no full stops. Great structure, nice images, lovely finish, all that.

    I love your phantom limb.