Austin, another poem written with the maturity of a wise old man. Your trip was worth it since it produced this gem. Well done.

This is a truley strong and moving piece of work, there is so much power in every line, such a great reflection of pride and strength, and loss and turmoil. A great, moving poem.

Well done.

This was just like the other poem I read, rather similar, yet still holds a potent message. I remember seeing this memorial myself, definitely a very gorgeous one. When you see it, it definitely makes you appreciate all of those who have made a difference by fighting for our country. They should always be honored, well done. You did a nice job, I can picture it clearly.

I REALLY loved this. I'm writing and essay about patriotism right now and I think this would be great for it.

*** BUT I WILL MOST DEFINATELY NOT -- I REPEAT NOT -- USE YOUR POEM!! ***

i was just lookin for ideas =P

GREAT JOB

--hannah