Comments : The Ivory Towers

  • 13 years ago

    by TowerDreamer

    Thank you so much for the comment above - it made my day!

    If anyone has any other comment - either positive or negative, I would love to read them.

  • 13 years ago

    by TowerDreamer

    Comment removed - I posted it to wrong poem

  • 13 years ago

    by TowerDreamer

    Comment removed - I posted it to wrong poem

  • 13 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    The imagery in this poem is simply breath taking. I mean wow...very vivd pictures which made me feel like I was with you the whole time. I love the diction you used, very clever and well used. You didh't just throw a bunch of words into your poem and call it a day. Everything had meaning. Everything was so beauitful and delicate. Very sweet and interesting piece. I think you'd have more readers if you broke it into pieces. I had to do that when I was reading it, break it down. Because sometimes with a poem of this length it's hard to stay focused. But other than that I really enjoyed it. The story you told wasa very creative one. Nice work. Nik

  • 13 years ago

    by kelleyana

    Oh my... This poem makes me pause for a while, then thinking what a vivid piece of work. It's like watching a film sitting while ones imagination participates in the scene. I think it's a good thing you left the tower, but you shouldn't had giving her the key. Does she really merit the key? Maybe. Never could you regret writing such a wonderful piece, you are right. I really enjoy me read. Very well done, kel.

  • 13 years ago

    by XxFallenxFromxGracexX

    This was very interesting and unusual. Its not the style im used to but it was an enjoyable read, it flowed very nicely and was a lot like a short story, i really liked the mystery in it.
    gud write