Comments : You asked her...

  • 13 years ago

    by Maverick

    Good use of repetition, especially with it being the main idea here. =/ I hope this isn't a personal experience but with poetry it so often is. Either way, it's a great expression of a feeling that many people unfortunately have to feel. Keep writing !

  • 13 years ago

    by Lioness

    Hey girl,
    I've been in this situation so I can relate to this poem.
    Loved it

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