My favorite place is the beach and even more now that I read this. Tastefully done, with passionate words. Well done.

Loved the imagery. I think that really brought the piece to life for me. Nice work. Nik

This warm poem radiates a deep feeling of passion and desire. Excellent.

5/5

The end of the poem.
Takes me back to the title.
Nice

Woh!.... this left me spellbound and wanting more! HaHa.A beautiful write, filled with love and passion.
Well Done Anthony :]

Emotions shouted out loud in this poem Excellent piece

Anthony

Got to be careful of those mermaids. :-)
Well done, thanks for sharing