Congrats on winning a share of first place in the contest and for sharing a day in your life with us.

Congrats sweetie :] this was very well done and I enjoyed every word. Always blowing me away with your work. :] Nik

How nice to see you posted something new:)

The feel this gave me is of that, which I have on beautiful, sunny days and the air is so pure and you feel like your lungs are going to burst from inhaling too deep, lol.

TJ, I read you loud and clear here.

One of the most valuable lessons I have learned is that you attract what is inside of you, the personal ideas of characteristics that are yours is what you attract/ encountner in the outside world. If your outlook is positive, you will find the world coming to your aid, so to say. People like to help those who are enthusiastic about what they do and have goals, worthy goals. I have no doubt you have those in your mind and heart, son. I admire you so much for your strenght of character and I honestly believe you will find yourself in the years to come and make a succes out of your life.

Well done,

5/5 Ingrid

We never know what the next day will bring in life, there's always uncertainty. Each day varies from the next. You did a great job expressing your feelings.

It is not so much that life is what you make of it;
rather, that life is what you make of yourself....

your poetically philosophical approach here makes your direction clear yo the reader....
take it with you everywhere..
remember you have it..
;-)

//Air of the unknown cradles me,
embracing me with expectation,
// yeah we wake up to uncertainities of each day... but our optimism keeps us going :)

//where others matter and are lifted from
the depths of poverty and vanquish // very thoughful... aren't we all searching for one such dimension.
well written.

Nicely crafted bro, it totally speaks the adventurous life that you are living right now. Well I guess the unknown road will lead us to endless full of surprises...be it fun or dangerous, either way it comprise the journey that we are ready to take.great work

This is such a beautiful piece. You worded it so well. :)
5/5

This is simple but well written. Nice job. The imagery is nice and the word choice is amazing.

Another well-written piece by you, hun. ^^
As I said before the improvement is very apparent. It seems like your style has gotten more unique and perfected in your newer works.

5/5

-Heather