Though your poem holds true, mostly, Jubilaince is not one of the words i would use to discribe us, coming from not only a soldiers point of veiw, but from a former street kid. our nation is constantly in a state of utter chaos, even during times of international peace, we are still fighting, our government is currupt and hell bent, and our children are undisaplined and chaotic, we advertise sex, drugs and anarchy through various forms of media, and when we watch the news we always hear about someone getting shot or robed or a natrual disaster, and when we have good news its usally something stupid like some kid won a local spelling b, wich dose not outway the numerious chatistroph that has become the norm. sorry for the rant, but my country is pissing me off, your poem non the less is beautiful and has returned some faith i have left in my country, I wish everyone thought like you and saw only beauty and where beautiful people themselves. I give you 5/5

Thank you for your comment i really appreciate it , and no it's not a rant that i saw but please read twisted words and you'll see what i mean or my country has lost it's way