Comments : What You Can't Have.

  • 13 years ago

    by Tammie

    Simply love it.

    The last line is gorgeous :)

    I miss being able to write. I envy you.

    Keep it up :)

  • 13 years ago

    by Jenna Bella Oldridge

    A beautiful poem and it flowed really well. I liked the opening stanza the most as it asll just went together perfectly

    5/5