Comments : Jealousy

  • 10 years ago

    by JaM

    I really enjoyed this poem, what I expected isn't what followed and that was GREAT :) I first thought it was in relation to a person, rather than itself. I most of all liked the second last line in your second stanza; "she's skilled in the art of lying" so true! many times I have felt that, and disguised it as something other. Great write! 5/5