a good poem short but good I hope he tells you whats wrong in the end

Hey, not a great great peom, but it was alright, you should try re-writting this? making it longer or putting a bit more thought into it. I'm not trying to be mean or anything, I hope you don't think of it that way. Anyways, keep writting, I'll check out some of your other poems. Toodles
Love,

-Blue