Comments : Not How Things Are Suppose To Go {Explicit Wording}

  • 13 years ago

    by Daisy if you do

    Very nice little rant you have here, and its flow is right on. It is sad that you speak of truth in this write, and no it is not how things should go. Great Job, enjoyed it thoroughly.

    Take Care,
    Kay

  • 6 years ago

    by mossgirl19

    Loved the repetition in here. Great rhyming and flow once again. Sadly, we always hurt the one we love.

    • 6 years ago

      by Bradley Peter

      Reading this poem again, I read it with intrigue and fondness. thank you for your comments, and for bringing me back to this piece