And in our bed of music,
Our song was sweetly played.
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Over all the best line, great ending sentence. I loved how you put love making and music together, what a good idea!

Thank you (: i really appreciate it (: it was my first ever poem like that haha (:

Very good. i love how you captured the scene, good work girl :)

Thank you so much, i appreciate the feedback (:
much appreciation,
Katie(: