This was intense....a good poem a jealousy but not over dramatic jealousy...

ive never been in the situation of loving someone who is in love with someone else but it must be tough.
This poem was really different. I actually really enjoyed it and I liked your word choice!
I think I like that this poem didn't rhyme or really have a style to it. It seemed like a descriptive rant!
Good job! worth the read!

Great work!! I loved it!! :)