Comments : It's about time.

  • 13 years ago

    by YoYoLoverJSRF

    This is an excellent poem that shows real emotion and feeling. Keep it up! ~<3Aleasha<3~

  • 13 years ago

    by brokenhearted teenage girl

    Thank youu ! :D<3

  • Just to get some things out of the way...
    Couple of typos:
    'Finially' -- Finally
    "My stomach would get major butterflies just 'THEY' way..." -- the

    Okay then...

    I really liked the emotion and meaning behind the poem just at the end it was a little confusing as to which "it's about time" is referring to. Are you referring to the fact that you are finally over this Tyler person or is it the fact that this person has finally realised you were there and had these feelings..??

    However, the poem itself was great, lacked flow but you're still young, and you will learn heaps off this site. (:

    Well done.

  • 13 years ago

    by brokenhearted teenage girl

    Haha, thank you ! :)
    it's about time, referred to me getting over him.

    yeah, i know, i'm not that good.
    but thank you :)

  • 13 years ago

    by brokenhearted teenage girl

    Awe, thank you!