This broke my heart. :( So emotional. It shows how when someone has hurt you, you try to put on a face and try to shrug it off like it doesn't matter, try to show the world it didn't hurt you... but in the end you crack... and everyone already knows how it's hurt you. So sorry you have had these feelings, but they only make you stronger in the end! 5/5

That they do! Thanks for reading (:

I liked the repetition of the title through out the poem, I always love this although I know others don't. But for me it works when it is done well and in this case it was done well.

Another sad poem, one of deep paina nd hurt from someone else, but another lesson you will learn and will make you stronger. The way I now look at it is : although it hurts at the time, one day you will look back and realise that they all made amazing poems from you!!

keep writing