Comments : Regret

  • 13 years ago

    by JaM

    I really like this poem! It's awful, for the fact that you have something taken away from you, most losses are painful and you've beautifully expressed that through your words. One part I like most is;

    We both had promised
    It wouldn't be awkward,
    We'd still be friends.
    You lied.

    I enjoy the bluntness of the last line in this stanza. It was comical for a split second too, which really gave your poem - personality.

    Thanks for the great read!!
    Jam.

  • 13 years ago

    by Soft Parade

    Good write, insightlful.

    Like this line best:
    "My heart beats your name."

    Keep it up.

  • 13 years ago

    by veronica

    Wow :D ilovee thiss onee it's full of meaning&&ikan see yuu rlly putt feeling into itt(:

  • 12 years ago

    by shayla

    I love this poem with a passion :]

    i love the part when you said:
    "My heart beats your name."