Beautiful flow, an awesome sketch on real day life… That I touched.

The atmosphere and choice of words really came through in this poem, especially the rhyming couplets. Usually the poet would write out each line separately, but you've written some parts out in prose and it's different, and gives a really good effect in my opinion.

The angel and the shield part is really touching too, and full of emotion. 5/5, I hope you write more :)