I liked the last stanza the best and i like how you didn't force it to rhyme and it just flowed but it would've been easier to read if you had correct punctuation where it was needed. if you cannot be bothered changing that (i dont expect you too) it was still worth the read.

- mouse.

Very nice piece. pretty inspirational at times though its classified as sad.

the first four stanzas are strongly written, and stand out, giving a good start.

'i know who i am
i am a fighter
i am a friend
i am a human'

nice... i also like the fourth stanza, very positive

but i also like how you kept tying in the sorrow in between the positives. it plays on the emotions.

I can relate to this poem. great poem 5/5

I love this poem its writen well and i can relate 5/5

Loved it :)
so sad and emotional but i can relate to it 5/5 x

I can totally relate to this.. its very emotional, but that is what makes an amazing poem :D

I can relate to this poem in several ways, I love how it flows! You did a great job! :)

I can very much relate to this

It really sucks how so many people like myself, can relate to this poem. .it is a very well written poem, loved it. it inspired me to smile, and say i can go on, instead of just wanting to quit and give up...

I absolutly love this. it shows how strong you are. love it

Thanks

Oh my goodness.... This is so powerful, and raw, and so full of emotion I was crying while reading this. I absolutely love it and I think its perfect.

Very nice.....I like that your not giving up....that's very brave...I know it's hard to be.....when you feel like the worlds against you.....but keep believing....and it will.all.work out:)

I love that you effectively communicate the pain that you feel in the beginning, then steadily went to a higher place, but you still had the hurt. I know this well, you may be over it, but nothing really goes away.
"i will not show i am scared"
Great piece right there, and probably my favorite! keep going, I love you writing so far ;D

Im different from you because i ask why and then i dont care what their opinions are its what i think of myself. And i show my scars proudlt because it shows when i let other opinions conform my personality its the physical chains. I stopped cutting casue i started being myself.

Kelwin this is very amazing I choked up when I read it

Omg... this made me cry... and i be thinking that way all the time... nice poem