Warm.. :)

WHO HIS ONE ABOUT?

Loved this hun

I want to tell you
Yell it out to the sky
Shout for all to hear
And ask you why

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Love the start stanza
You wanting everyone to hear and ask him why.
Love the use of words short and powerful! And straight to the point

I want to cry to you
Confess everything I hid
To turn back the time
Undo do everything I did

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Second stanza
Your expresing how long you've hid your crys and finally want to confess everything. The last line I think remove the "do" because you already said undo it will flow better.

But over all beatiful poem
Great write and flow(:

5/4

I felt this this is a good piece :)