This was a bit choppy, hun!

I like the wording, message, just it seems like you chopped it into too many small pieces.

I just read it again and it's a little eerie somehow..it is as if you are afraid of this person you are talking about, about how he/ she will affect you once you let them into your life..mmmhh..I like a poem that leaves me thinking about the content!

Well done:)

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