Two sdies of the one person? That is the impression I was left with, but that is the sign of a good poem - many interpetations depending on the readers mood and understanding.

Well done.

I agree with Soft Parade.

Bravo.

Very good, almost inspirational!

Hun I thought this poem was okay. Nothing about it really stood out to me. I think you used a lot of old and worn out lines. I'd love to see a more creative piece from you. The emotional content was strong. I could tell yuo were hurting and wanted this other person to help you get better. Keep working at it. -Nik